Friendship
“Wack” as my brother kicks me with his unbelievably strong leg. “ Gosh” I hate him sometimes but at the end of the day he is my older brother. I can always find the room to forgive him. Our friendship means the world to me. He is a great, kind and trustworthy brother. What would I do without him.
He is as charming as a prince and is always there for me. Even though were complete opposites we make a great team. We’ve always been really close and I hope it stays that way. He takes me anywhere I want to go. It`s really generous. He stands up for me, loves me and I couldn’t ask for anything more from such an amazing brother.
One time we went to Water Garden`s. We went to Max Brenner, A.M.F bowling and had a great time! It was the most fun since the first man walked on the moon. I beat him in both games of bowling smashing him around 60 to 100. At Max Brenner we had a double choc fudge brownie sundae with melted chocolate and choco balls. It was so delicious I would give anything to have another one. It was the BEST DAY EVER!
So I guess sometimes I wish he was never born, but there are always more positives than negatives. That`s why we’ll always be friends no matter what happens.
What would I do without my best friend, my beautiful brother?
Such a great text Keely! I can imagine Zac doing the things you have described in your text! I really liked your use of Power of Three and Similes.
Keep up the great work.
From Miss Fraser 🙂
Thank you Miss Fraser,
I actually have two brothers Kyle and Zac.
They are both fabulous brothers but these text was about Kyle.
Do you have any siblings?
Your big brother loves you to bits and he most definitely would never kick you. (glad you told me it wasn’t true)
that was a very good story I like when you added alliteration to your story
Such an entertaining story Keely. You can really get a feel of how well you and Kyle get along. Can’t wait to read your next piece of writing!
Keely, that’s a great story! I know both of your beautiful brothers and I agree you are very lucky to have them. One of the fun things about writing a story is that it is fiction and that means the writer (you, in this case) is the boss and can write whatever she wants! It doesn’t have to be true at all or can be a little bit true and a little bit made up 🙂 Your mum took me to Max Brenner once so I can tell you come from a family of bad influences 😉 (That’s a joke, you have a lovely family.) xxx Love Katharine
KEELY GREAT STORY I LOVED IT!!!!!!
I loved your story keely!! It is very interesting.
What part do you like about Keely’s story?
Wonderful Story, Keely! I wish I could do all that with my brothers, but they’re too young. ( I also wish I could have that double choc fudge brownie sundae with melted chocolate and choco balls)